Before I get into what I got into, I’d like to address the elephant in the room. Am I probably going too far with how much research I do before even starting on a scene of script? Yeah. Did I do this much the first time? Nope. Did I want to? Kind of, but I was writing for a class instead of on my own time, so I had to just write.
That being said, I’m treating this excessive and unnecessary amount of research as practice; I’m learning what type of information I research will end up being useful or useless. Plus, I’m certainly no expert in Westerns, so I wouldn’t need to do as much if I were writing a comedy, or something about a college student or retail worker.
Now that I’ve rambled, let’s get into the first bits of research I did for Ink and Iron (title pending, obviously).
- The Central Plot
- Having so much time to reflect on an unfinished script has its consequences. I had a big new idea for the central plot, in that instead of Rian being mystically transported to another realm in an accident, he instead works for a company that does something similar. Instead of Rian trying to find his way home (and deciding whether or not that remains central to the story), he has a clear goal and timetable.
- Problem 1 with the new Central Plot
- This raises a series of new questions, one of which I spent a considerable amount of time thinking about: Should Rian be the fresh new hire or the 4-days-from-retirement-veteran? So I created a Pros and Cons list.
| Young | Old | |
| Pros | Room for character growth, audience relatability as both are new to the world of story-travelling, benefits from character’s energy and excitement | Character can make more intelligent and informed decisions, attitude might work well in the Wild West environment, easier to relate backstory to the events of the plot, can relate to the decline of the Wild West if in the right time |
| Cons | Lack of experience can be hard to write around, might have to focus on dumb luck or randomness to progress the story, might come across as naive or immature | Requires jadedness or a lack of urgency, harder to write a large and dramatic character arc |
I’m leaning towards a young protagonist, more because that feels more in my realm as a writer, but further research could change my mind.
- The Antagonist
- Still thinking about using the Pinkerton Detective Agency as a central antagonist, both because of my adoration for Red Dead Redemption 2 and because they can serve as a metaphor for certain things going in the the US today.
- The Setting
- Here’s where the meat of my research was this time, and where it will be for the next time, most likely.
- I want things to feel grounded and real, so I want to use a real moment in American History. That doesn’t mean the script has to focus on the Civil War if it happens in 1864.
- The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly takes place during the Civil War, but it’s far from the focus of the movie. War-related plot points occur, of course, like the bridge scenes with Blondie and Tuco, or the gold they’re chasing being from a Confederate caravan. But both of those could feasibly happen during the Mexican-American War, or the gold + a smaller version of the bridge conflict happens during the California Gold Rush
- I’m in the process of deciding between four states: New Mexico, Wyoming, Nevada, and Montana. I did a fair amount of research on Montana this time, as I felt it would be the most unique from typical Western associations.
- In the 19th century, Montana was big on fur trading, cattle ranching, and mining industries. Any one of these are good targets for an antagonistic Pinkerton Agency to take over.
- Based on the quick history I read, I figure the best timeframe for a Montana-based story would be somewhere between 1864 and 1887.
- Montana is recognized as a state in 1864, and most conflicts with Native American tribes are *ahem* resolved by 1887.
- If I want to use the Pinkertons as a primary antagonist, then this timeframe, and the military conflicts with Native Americans and Mexicans, provide a great reason the American Government would want some extra help in this specific region.
There’s a lot more research I want to do before I get cracking on the script itself. I don’t see myself doing this much work for EVERY script, but it’s fun to learn about American history while accomplishing some sort of progress in this whole process of mine.
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